Wind whips across the waves,
Thrashing them back and forth.
They curn a dark blue, with stark white foam crashing aside the ship.
I stand at the mast, over looking the chaos.
Back and forth, back and forth.
The ships rocks, trying to throw the crew over board.
Why is it that there are no fish?
Where have they gone?
Are they hiding, like my crew, under us?
Back and forth, back and forth.
Sails crack, flowing around through the wind.
The rain feels like hail, and thunder is rolling in the distance.
And so I blink again, and everything is calm.
Sunny, sea gulls flying over head and fish blubbering around.
I guess this is what it is like,
In the sea of my mind.
...."The sea of my mind..." LOVE THIS!
ReplyDeletethis is amazing! Great writing, livy. really paints a picture in your mind
ReplyDeleteAwesome writing, I really like how you can picture this and how everybody will picture something else but at the same time it's all the same because of what you said.
ReplyDeleteLivy that is really good. Keep on writing.
ReplyDeleteLOVE LOVE LOVVEEEE THIS! I love the ocean.
ReplyDeleteThis is awesome! Love the twist at the end!
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